Saturday, August 6, 2011

Grey Nomads

He navigates
a fast escape
from aged homes
open mouthed drool

Slumped asleep
front seat
glasshoused heat
she dreams of everlastings



2 comments:

  1. Perhaps I read too much into this, but I love the reverberation of the last word back through the poem. There's a word in Japanese for this technique, but my memory has misplaced it ...

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  2. You didn't read too much into the poem...everlasting was it.

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